Grandma Always Slept Nude

Author: Peggy Paris ASL Info:    61/F/USA Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 747 /570 /167 Words: 109

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Grandma Always Slept Nude

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A male toad with a craving for bugs Hopped inside to lay low on our rugs. In the middle of night, Grandma turned on a light. Poor toad croaked at the sight of her jugs. When old Grandma saw toad on the floor, She assumed that the croak was a snore. With her nude as can be, A kiss, his destiny, The toad yelled, "No prince am I, you whore!" The real truth of the matter remains--- An urn now holds our Grandma's cremains. Yes, she kissed him; she did. Her prince was just a kid, And our rugs are now marked with poop stains.

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poor grandma...but poorer frong i think...what a scare! clever poem... reminds me of ray stevens' humor...which is pretty damn good. jacob

| Posted on 2011-12-20 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

My eyes, my eyes...I have been struck blind just by reading about those sagging wrinkled up old jugs. The old broad should at lease been in a nightie. Fun stuff Sharon.

| Posted on 2008-06-07 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]

This was really funny! I love reading your comedy peices! They always make me laugh! lol

| Posted on 2008-05-22 00:00:00 | by mysterious one | [ Reply to This ]

he he he...I just loved this hopping piece! Good for Grandma ma! This was truly unique and a wonderful limmerick! love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share tif ~*~

| Posted on 2008-05-21 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]

Ha! Great fun! Very unusual story, and a delightful, funny verse!!

| Posted on 2008-05-20 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

This was so funny! At first when I saw the title I thought it was going to be something a little more.... serious. I don't know why. It kind of serves as a warning. When you're old and saggy, don't sleep naked. If you do you'll scar some poor little kid. lol this was great. Keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep reading »Haely«

| Posted on 2008-05-20 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]

lol!

| Posted on 2008-05-20 00:00:00 | by Madelaine | [ Reply to This ]

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