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Franky the kid! stupid

Author: rawpot
ASL Info:    24/M/India
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Words: 42
Class/Type: Poetry /Angry
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just some stupid blast i had to post

Franky the kid! stupid

I mean, where was I,
You rock, stock eating pile of shit,
why your mama wasnt at home
you come here and seek my tits

you freaking idiot,
i am not the one with a tit
i am Franky the kid

Submitted on 2008-05-20 13:19:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  lol I dunno man. You Indians really post some strange stuff. It's funny tho...
| Posted on 2008-05-20 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]

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