The way you looked at me...
Warm brown eyes shining across a blue tiled table
The warmth of your hand
The fragrant smell of grass and rain
I watched your lips with longing
A smile like diamonds in my eyes
A smile I'll have to forget
A story with no beginning...or end
Just a look on my face no one understands
I will never forget your beautiful face
I will never forget the passion
Unrequited
And I will always remember
The kiss we never shared | 
Submission Name: Forget
I like this one out of the first 10 pieces of your work. Only because I can relate to it. I love how you've managed to capture your/the speaker's feelings. You've managed to do a great piece here. =3 I wish I can give comments like you but I can't. >.< lol Thanks for the feedback on my story though, next chappie is going to be posted in a few minutes. AND I LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR MY FIRST COMMENT!!!