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    dots Submission Name: All in the Pastdots
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    Author: BlazeFlamme
    ASL Info:    22/m/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 23/160/138
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsAll in the Pastdots
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    I forgave you today
    And it wasn't just words
    Took my life away
    Is all my heart heard

    So it took awhile
    As you should know
    I tried to hold on
    So hard to let go

    Had to give up my dreams
    So long my state of mind
    Was ripped at the seams
    And it took so much time

    Then I gave up my hate
    You weren't the one to blame
    This happened due to fate
    I would have done the same

    I was filled with so much anger
    Although I prayed for you every night
    But as time progressed forward
    My prayers were steadily set right

    I used to pray for you to be happy
    And I prayed to get over you
    Now I pray for us both to see
    Only what god wants us to

    We are but flesh on earth
    Mistakes are surely made
    Someday things will look up
    Our sins will surely fade

    And so I shouldn't hold a grudge
    I'm glad you’re happy now
    I'll find my one good thing
    And keep it safe and sound

    I've dried all my tears
    And put a smile on
    After so many years
    Our story is done




    Submitted on 2008-05-21 07:45:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I liked this poem as well as the point behind it. A lot of times it is hard to forgive others. But its a great feeling of release when you finally do. Good job!
    | Posted on 2008-05-22 00:00:00 | by mysterious one | [ Reply to This ]


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