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    dots Submission Name: what love...dots
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    Author: Impy
    ASL Info:    16/f/somewhere
    Elite Ratio:    2.11 - 11/15/16
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 62
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotswhat love...dots
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    i have never felt such love before
    the way i feel with you
    but yet i still and must implore
    how much do you love me too?
    you say you cannot love
    as much as you once did
    cant you forget and onward move,
    then remain so bitter and dead?
    i want you to just forget
    and become so souly mine
    dont want this to be another regret
    just to be lost in time
    you care for me, most loyal
    although you made one mistake
    but through it all i smile
    to think of a wedding cake.
    and eternity lost in your arms
    would suit my cold heart well
    you stop all of my problem storms
    with kisses that bring me from hell.
    longing overtakes my mind
    i want you forever more
    with a ring, we could bind
    and live happily ever after...




    Submitted on 2008-05-21 13:49:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nice poem with a heart felt words ..
    I like thos line

    'dont want this to be another regret'.

    have never felt such love before
    the way i feel with you
    but yet i still and must implore
    how much do you love me too

    good poem I enjoy it
    | Posted on 2008-05-22 00:00:00 | by muhammed | [ Reply to This ]



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