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    dots Submission Name: Midst of Midnightdots
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    Author: EmpathicAya
    ASL Info:    13+8/unMale/Your Mind
    Elite Ratio:    7.31 - 700/456/109
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 1396
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    Description:
       Well the stuff in italics belong to William Shakespeare and it's from Cymbeline.

    The reason I chose to use it is because Loreena McKennitt made this wondeful song from it, and it's just gorgeous, and beautiful so I used it. But the words in italics are not mine...
    Thank you!!!
    ~Azura*


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    dotsMidst of Midnightdots
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    In the midst of midnight,
    moonlight swayed through
    my windows in a mist
    of emancipated magick, whispering...
          "The sceptre, learning, physics, must
           All follow this and come to dust.
    "

    I resided in dreams in the midst
    of moonlight mist, when She entered
    my room. Gazing in prolonged sadness,
    She revelled in the beauty of my face.
          "Golden lads and girls all must
           As chimney sweepers come to dust
    ..."

    In a silent ritual, She swirled around
    my head with spells of life undone.
    Hating haste, but remembering
    that Dawn had caught her last.

    With a chillingly warm kiss
    to my cheek, She desolately departed
    with my soul
    singing...
          "All lovers young, all lovers must
           Consign to thee and come to dust
    ..."




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    ||| Comments |||
      Very good! I could really get a very good picture of this going on in my mind!
    | Posted on 2009-01-19 00:00:00 | by PhantomRose | [ Reply to This ]
      I am a fan of the Bard and always will be. That you have taken the time to use his ideas, I really like.

    But what it means is essentially up to you. But alchemy, the process of transforming iron into gold applies for any science or art.
    That is what I believe at least.

    It's about intent and I don't doubt yours. And the mystery is how it is revealed to us and not taught. So we listen and drink of bit of poetry and Shakespeare just to aid in revealing the light.

    Thanks for sharing , loved one

    Nan
    | Posted on 2008-06-04 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]


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