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    dots Submission Name: Eternal Lovedots
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    Author: Zara
    ASL Info:    16,Female, U.S.
    Elite Ratio:    5.64 - 13/16/10
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 73
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 515



    Description:
       This is a poem I wrote for someone I love very much. He is my Love. It is kind of about both of us... But I wrote it for him about the two of us. I have fallen in love with him. He is an amazing guy. He provided the title for this poem... I really couldn't think of one. He is the best and he is always there for me. I always try to do my best to be there for him too. I am so very glad he has come into my life.


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    dotsEternal Lovedots
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    Sleep quietly my Love,
    Dawn is comming quickly -
    Do you hear?
    It's glimmering rays -
    To wash bad dreams away.

    A voice on teh dawn -
    So easily drawn -
    To comfort you -
    I love You.

    No more fears -
    Love just hears -
    Soft melodies -
    Playing gently.

    Days and days -
    So many ways -
    Together we always face
    Each and every place -
    Each day -
    And each way.




    Submitted on 2008-05-21 17:58:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It is clear from your poem that you 2 care about each other and love each other. I think the way you expressed it in this poem was really good. Good job and i hope the best for you two! :)
    -Harriet-
    | Posted on 2008-05-22 00:00:00 | by Aangskate | [ Reply to This ]
      Everytime I read it and hear it...it always touches me and makes me feel so happy Eva...it is very beautiful, and I love it, and I love you, so much my Angel.
    | Posted on 2008-05-21 00:00:00 | by Aion Kiori | [ Reply to This ]



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