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    dots Submission Name: The Earthquake Mournsdots
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    Author: PrInCeToNgIrL
    ASL Info:    18/F/HK
    Elite Ratio:    3.35 - 18/21/20
    Words: 209
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 35
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    dotsThe Earthquake Mournsdots
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    The Earthquake Mourns

    Do You Hear..
    the people singing a song of helplessness,
    of hunger after those endless hours without a bite
    of weariness after those thousand miles without a stop
    of lost after those houses collapsed?

    Do You See..
    the children's fear in the eye
    because they lose their home, their family?
    Bits and bits, debris scattered every where,
    those houses lost, and family broken?

    Do You Taste..
    the blood on those cuts after an earthquake,
    the tears dripping down those rose red cheeks,
    paper, grass, or an earthworm,
    whatever people put in their mouthes to survive?

    Do You Smell..
    the frustration like a burnt cotton candy,
    the mourning cries so sour
    like green lemons sticking at your nose,
    the rotten dead corps, once your love?

    Do You Feel..
    the people's despair, yet desperate to find
    their love. People's hopelessness, yet aspire for a better
    future. Feel the shaking of the ground? The stumbling
    of the stones? The cracking of the crust?

    If You Hear, listen close and reply.
    If You See, watch and pray.
    If You Taste, taste it with care.
    If You Smell, find and search.
    If You Feel, open your arms and help.

    People in SiChuan need you.




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      What a nice tribute to the Sichuan victims! May all pray for the well being and the recovery of the people in the Sichuan province!
    | Posted on 2008-07-07 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]



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