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    dots Submission Name: Your Blue Throatdots
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    Author: LucyDiamond
    ASL Info:    17/F/Sky
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 365/561/240
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 89
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    Bytes: 375



    Description:
       something about shiva.


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    dotsYour Blue Throatdots
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    I have fermented expectations,
    ripe with infection
    and keen dissatisfaction.

    You’re a new breed of man,
    but you bow down
    to extinction
    every time I blink my eye.

    You’re extinguishable,
    but you don’t need my help.

    You’ll manage to die out
    all on your own.





    Submitted on 2008-05-21 23:28:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      It almost reminds me of a reverse Dr. Who feel. Instead of admiration for the whims, stupidity, and ongoing experiments people do tot hemselves just to know, it's the opposite... or maybe Sci-Fi has just gotten to my head.

    Either way, it's good and I do get the idea of alchoholism now that it's put in my mind, but I also see it as response to global warning or any other self-inflicted problem for all humanity; like a cynical god's point o' view.
    | Posted on 2008-05-22 00:00:00 | by Khosi | [ Reply to This ]
      I am assuming by the opening "fermented expectations" and closing "You'll manage to die out all on your own" that this has something to do with alcoholism?

    The feelings I get from this are overwhelming disappointment in another human being. Very powerful. Nicely done.
    | Posted on 2008-05-22 00:00:00 | by Immortalis | [ Reply to This ]



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