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    dots Submission Name: Curfewsdots
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    Author: cor
    ASL Info:    16/M/NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.28 - 28/24/30
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 149
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    Bytes: 796



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    dotsCurfewsdots
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    The ineffective curfews that don't work
    All because of some jerk
    Crime rates don't change for the good
    It won't change even if it could
    Police are coming down like hail
    Throwing innocent kids in jail
    Treating us like dogs
    While they turn in the wheel like cogs
    Mistreating good teens
    Not stopping the actually bad scenes
    Police getting paid more
    But they don't close the crime's door
    The real crimes don't stop
    It seems as if there is no cop
    There's strain on Adults
    Theres no end to the insults
    Curfews that cost to much
    Holding back society like a crutch
    And hopefully before long
    We'll be where we belong




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