Jumping Blind into Future Waters by MinervaBlu

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Author:	MinervaBlu
ASL Info:	17 nowhere
Elite Ratio:	3.63 - 240/230/178
Words:	104

Class/Type:	Poetry/Trapped
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Jumping Blind into Future Waters dots

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I'm jumping blind
I cannot see
But I must do it
Though I know I'll be sorry
I've always said
Forever and always is a lie
Not to promise these things
Because they mean goodbye
Don't worry about tomorrow
Worry about the moments we're living now
Bit I didn't listen to my own advice
I should've said no, but I never knew how
What about the future years?
Is this a decision I'll regret?
I hope it isn't, I really do.
I want this promise to be good
But to forsee the future?
I only wish I could

Submitted on 2008-05-22 19:43:12 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I thisnk it's a very good poem, it talks about all the things we usually think about when getting into something new. It was very interesting!
I think that not knowing what's going to happen in the future is what makes life exciting, and there's no way of knowing how are things going to be unless you jump into them.
My advise is that you shouldn't be afraid, you should just go for it and see what happens. However, be cautious so that you don't get hurt, and don't give it all until you know that it is safe.
Take care!
| Posted on 2008-06-04 00:00:00 | by rachel gless | [ Reply to This ]
i think you mean "But" instead of "Bit."

there is definitely some wisdom here. we cannot know what the future holds. all we really have is today, so we must enjoy it to the fullest. this is a huge lesson i'm learning right now in my life. and regret only eats you up from the inside. what is done and past can't be changed, so the regret is really futile.

i hope you don't regret whatever decision you made. i have a hard time saying no too, but i'm learning.

thanks for the read and the reminder!

peace,
~Cat
| Posted on 2008-05-22 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]

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