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    dots Submission Name: Icedots
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    Author: UnderlinedInRed
    ASL Info:    18/f/PA
    Elite Ratio:    4.24 - 196/262/123
    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 533
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsIcedots
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    Sometimes I wish he knew
    How much I wanted to forget
    To wipe away the moments few,
    Amongst the months of ice
    The stabbing shards of distance--
    To simply melt away into
    A sleep filled nothingness.




    Submitted on 2008-05-23 02:09:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I enjoy, to me it's talking of some relationship. Maybe a lover, friend, or even a brother or sister. It makes me think of a couple who have been separated by a war or family or something else, one has traveled a long ways away, and the other mourn them. One waits for the other but is at the same time for it all to end. I enjoy it, keep up :]
    | Posted on 2009-06-11 00:00:00 | by Scaredheart | [ Reply to This ]
      very inspiring , but dramatic with great detailed , a hurt from the past is cold as ice, your thoughts reflects what you deeply feel, something to forget that once was before, good poem , keep writing
    | Posted on 2009-04-15 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


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