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    dots Submission Name: Why did you??dots
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    Author: xXTorn2piecesxX
    ASL Info:    16/f/PA
    Elite Ratio:    4.2 - 2/4/10
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 67
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 585



    Description:
       This poem is about how my ex boyfriend broke my heart after he told me he wouldnt and he just ripped me to pieces in side.


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    dotsWhy did you??dots
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    “WHY DID YOU????”

    Why did you say you loved
    Me if it wasn’t true,
    Why did you hug me
    If you were gonna let me go,
    Why did you feel me,
    If all you were going to do was kill me
    Why did you even stare if all you did was fear
    And turn your back
    Why did you keep coming back
    If all you were going to do is
    Leave again … I know why…
    You did it because you were scared
    And it caused me pain because
    I cared so much about you!!






    Submitted on 2008-05-23 07:57:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      He doesn't deserve you if he treated you this way. You deserve better, and you'll probably find someone who loves you as much as you love him. You seem like a nice girl, and you deserve true love.

    This poem was clear, honest and made me feel your pain.

    Chin up, you got to move on. I repeat, he doesn't deserve you.

    Take care.

    -Allison
    | Posted on 2008-05-24 00:00:00 | by revol | [ Reply to This ]



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