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Author:	hawkeye
ASL Info:	20/Female/Kentucky
Elite Ratio:	2.47 - 9/18/10
Words:	82

Class/Type:	Rant/Venting
Total Views:	625
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	462

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I'm so sick and tired
Of everyones bullshit
I hate this fucking place
Why the fuck does it matter
I hate that fucking guy
He thinks he can fucking cuss at me
Well I have something to say about that
He can suck a dick for all I care
Who the hell does he think he is
Someone needs to beat his ass
I wish it could be me
Because I would make him suffer.
FUCK YOU COACH BLACK

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Tell us how you really feel :)

I'm not stopping by to critique this poem, merely to say keep your head up in regards to your husband. There is a nation behind him and a bunch of us that share your pain. I send my respect and good wishes to you both. I know it sucks over there, four tours and it never got any easier. Good luck!!

Nick

| Posted on 2010-01-28 00:00:00 | by Nicholas Lala | [ Reply to This ]

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