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    dots Submission Name: Brush Your Shoulders Offdots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
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    dotsBrush Your Shoulders Offdots
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    Life comes at you fast,
    it kicks you in the ass
    and puts you on the ground
    without warning.

    You're planted in the dirt,
    nothing seems worth it
    and you feel lost;
    you feel empty.

    You have nothing,
    yet you cannot quit.
    You cannot give up
    and fall down for good.

    Stand up,
    brush your shoulders off
    and keep moving;
    this is the meaning of life.




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