A Single Kiss by Vampiric Death

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Submission Name: A Single Kiss dots

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Author:	Vampiric Death
Elite Ratio:	2.28 - 126/152/86
Words:	37

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	68
Average Vote:	4.0000
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A Single Kiss dots

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A single look
sets my cold heart on fire;
a single smile
fills me with butterflies;
a single touch
puts my head in the heavens;
and a single kiss,
it makes me melt into your love

Submitted on 2008-05-23 14:31:35 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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This poem is so sweet. I know how you feel, because I'm in love too, and I melt whenever I'm around him. :)

Beautiful piece.

-Allison
| Posted on 2008-05-24 00:00:00 | by revol | [ Reply to This ]

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