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    dots Submission Name: A Single Kissdots

    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsA Single Kissdots

    A single look
    sets my cold heart on fire;
    a single smile
    fills me with butterflies;
    a single touch
    puts my head in the heavens;
    and a single kiss,
    it makes me melt into your love

    Submitted on 2008-05-23 14:31:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem is so sweet. I know how you feel, because I'm in love too, and I melt whenever I'm around him. :)

    Beautiful piece.

    | Posted on 2008-05-24 00:00:00 | by revol | [ Reply to This ]

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