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    dots Submission Name: The Soul Prayerdots
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    Author: EseanB
    ASL Info:    30/M/TN
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 99/138/84
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
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    Description:
       Be your own deity,
    Worship no false gods before you,
    Only you can save yourself from damnation.


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    dotsThe Soul Prayerdots
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    To my soul deep inside me,
    I recite this prayer,
    For without you,
    I am not whole.

    I promise to strengthen you,
    To protect you from evil,
    In return you will strengthen me,
    And protect me from sin.

    Through our meditation,
    We will achieve peace and calm,
    We will improve our well-being,
    And rise above the negatives.

    With no knowledge of our past lives,
    And our eyes on the future,
    I pray that our reincarnation,
    Provides us with a better life.




    Submitted on 2008-05-23 15:40:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hey this is really pleasant...i like the way you seem so ready to protect the girl no matter what...to protect each other from sins and all.This is really great~!kind of like the gist of a page of a paulo coelho book?lol..
    | Posted on 2008-05-25 00:00:00 | by EsCaPisT | [ Reply to This ]


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