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    dots Submission Name: Unimmortalizedots
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    Author: EseanB
    ASL Info:    29/M/TN
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 96/136/82
    Words: 245
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Gothic
    Total Views: 98
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 1705



    Description:
       I wrote these lyrics in hopes that one day it will be a song.


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    dotsUnimmortalizedots
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    (verse)
    Good evening, My Lord,
    We need to talk,
    About how we feel,
    On this moonlit night.

    We never wanted,
    To live forever,
    But you kept us entranced,
    By your promises,
    And your undead stare.

    We followed you for centuries,
    But that's too long,
    To even remember,
    If we used to laugh and play,
    When we were children.

    The pain is too great to bare,
    When our loved ones die,
    As every year passes by.

    We no longer want immortality,
    And your coffin days will soon end,
    As we demand our freedom,
    From this Hell.

    (bridge)
    Blood will fall,
    And you will see,
    That we were never,
    Meant to be.

    (chorus)
    We will be there in a minute,
    To unimmortalize us all.

    We will be there in a minute,
    To put a stake in your heart.

    We will be there in a minute,
    To say goodbye,
    Forever,
    and ever.

    (verse)
    We will seal your fate,
    With a final bloody kiss,
    From our crimson lips,
    Which you will surely miss.

    That will be,
    The last temptation,
    You will ever have.

    It is time to go, My Lord,
    The four winds are coming,
    To carry your ashes,
    Across the midnight ocean.

    (end chorus)
    Before we mortally die,
    We will pray to be reborn,
    With a better life,
    Out from under your shadow.

    And we will also pray,
    That our paths,
    Will never cross again.




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