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    dots Submission Name: Come Again?dots
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    Author: Raging Rain
    ASL Info:    18/F/WA
    Elite Ratio:    4.86 - 144/151/84
    Words: 195
    Class/Type: Lyrics/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 74
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1375



    Description:
       I don't know. It was more of a stream of consciousness writing. Reminded me a little bit of Imogen Heap's style.


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    dotsCome Again?dots
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    Come again
    I don't understand your words
    I'm just trying to explain
    Myself to you
    In phrases and places
    Easy to understand

    Come again
    Tell me why you push and
    Struggle and run away
    I don't know how to stay
    In one place
    I keep moving on
    I keep moving on away...

    (Main)
    Tell me
    The pictures on the wall meant something
    Tell me
    The faces we saw weren't meaningful
    Tell me
    I saw the real you in my head
    When I stood on my own two feet
    Don't knock me down
    Stick around
    But you'll leave anyway
    You always leave anyway

    Come again
    I don't understand your words
    I'm just trying to express myself
    To your self-absorbed self
    In commas and spaces
    Easy to read

    Now come again
    How many times must I say it
    I can't replace you
    My hands feel empty again
    And again...
    And again...all over...
    It's all over...


    (Bridge)
    With a kiss
    You made me a promise
    And nothing else mattered to me
    With a phone call
    It all ended
    You spent it
    You threw it away
    And in some weird way...




    Submitted on 2008-05-23 22:36:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      A love that is demanded or earned is never satisfying. Because the promise of fulfillment can never out-weigh the weight of the initial rejection. This is why even if he came back, you would only be able to live off the memory of a dream once held dear, only to become a nightmare you wish you could wake up from.

    You don't want this kind of Love.
    Even though you miss it now.

    P.s. I like Imogen Heap's music too.

    Cheers,
    -Tom
    | Posted on 2008-05-28 00:00:00 | by UnspokenDreamer | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

    this lyrics are amazing. It looks like you worked really hard on this piece and put a lot of emotion in it.

    The following was, by far, my favorite part :

    Come again
    Tell me why you push and
    Struggle and run away
    I don't know how to stay
    In one place
    I keep moving on
    I keep moving on away . . .

    It reminded me of things that i go through as well . . . . as i expect many others do to. These lyrics are so relatable, and thats what a lot of people look for in there music . . . . . . something they can feel a connection to

    great job

    > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > >

    S D 4 2
    | Posted on 2008-05-23 00:00:00 | by SilentDreams42 | [ Reply to This ]



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