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    dots Submission Name: Invincibledots
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    Author: Cora Windover
    ASL Info:    1,292/it/Radiant Garden
    Elite Ratio:    4.16 - 862/761/201
    Words: 228
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 98
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1557



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       if only this were true.


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    dotsInvincibledots
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    "I don't ask for much," she says.
    "I give a lot, hoping
    That my wish might be considered,"
    She tells me with her eyes turned down,
    A mumble in her tone.

    "And what's this one thing," I ask,
    "This tiny little thing
    That you would give up so much love
    To call your own?"

    "I want to be special,
    I want to be loved,
    I want to be with someone,
    I want to be the first one someone thinks of,
    I want to be the object, the recipient of love.

    "So if that's too much to ask for,
    I'll just be on my way - "

    She stops,
    I take her hand in mine.

    "Isn't that our only wish,
    For someone to believe?"

    "It isn't all that simple,
    And people say a lot of things,
    Relationships get complicated,
    Much as I - "

    She stops,
    With a tug against her hand.

    "And what if I said,
    That you are special,
    That I love you,
    That I want to be with you,
    That you're the first one I think of,
    That I want to give you everything,
    And in return - will you stay with me,
    And never let me go?"

    She smiles,
    And I feel invincible.

    "I'll follow you forever,
    And I'll never let you go."




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