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    dots Submission Name: The Cricketdots
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    Author: lovedeathsdeath
    ASL Info:    20/M/NCUSA
    Elite Ratio:    5.28 - 39/43/33
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 110
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 605



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    dotsThe Cricketdots
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    My chair squeaks
    as the cricket eeks
    its chirpy song into my ear.
    I press on though,
    and string my bow
    to shoot for some meat, a deer.

    I cannot kill
    for my belly to fill.
    This cricket took my cheer.

    His rhytm it spent
    the message he sent,
    and I found it rather queer

    That this cricket should stay
    For many a day
    And CHIRP a CHIRP,
    my computer to usurp,
    To keep me from a deer

    His songy song
    that seems so long
    into my unwilling ear.




    Submitted on 2008-05-24 11:44:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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