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    dots Submission Name: live loosedots
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    Author: every48seconds
    ASL Info:    16/M/Everywhere
    Elite Ratio:    3.28 - 101/118/110
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Legend
    Total Views: 82
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 593



    Description:
       cant clarify it, only you could do that for urself,comment however


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    dotslive loosedots
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    Get loose,let GO of logical thought
    Act ON instinct, not logic
    Fuck logic
    LET IT THINK out everything
    Let's get free for a while
    From strife, hate, LOVE, anxiety
    Whatever PLAGUES YOU, come with me
    WITH US, become free with us
    FIND what you've been looking for
    PEACEFUL resolution
    Angered DESTRUCTION
    Or just a bed TO MEND THE SOUL
    Whatever it may be
    Lets find that together
    Let's get free
    Let's get lose
    LET'S let GO!

    Inspiration for living




    Submitted on 2008-05-24 21:25:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Decent, I liked it, dropped the "F" bomb, didn't lose me, didn't see a point to it so guessing this is one of those put the college professor in thyself in the fracking closet, turn the brain off and enjoy kinda bits.... okay, did that read it a second time liked it a lot more... it rocks.... will definitely take a look at some more of your work...
    | Posted on 2008-05-26 00:00:00 | by caveman | [ Reply to This ]
      This is definitely going on my fav list. It's so inspiring and beautiful. Good job. :)

    -Allison
    | Posted on 2008-05-25 00:00:00 | by revol | [ Reply to This ]


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