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    dots Submission Name: memorial daydots
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    Author: vohomegirl
    ASL Info:    28 and at the gate...
    Elite Ratio:    6.83 - 314/191/78
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 77
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 427



    Description:
       for Austin.


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    dotsmemorial daydots
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    we remember
    bitter-salty tears
    and your blood still there
    never completely washed away
    time
    heals like the grass
    over mounds of memory
    mounds of pain
    the pain
    and you, you--
    rising toward the sun
    before it fades away with the day
    another season has passed
    only to return again
    with memories of you

    for just a day




    Submitted on 2008-05-24 21:27:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      A twice potent tribute, so short, but so very powerful! Extremely well done. I loved it. Bravo... Bravo... Bravo... michael
    | Posted on 2008-06-16 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      a soldier buddy?

    this is poignant, sarah...

    ...aching.
    | Posted on 2008-05-25 00:00:00 | by silent strings | [ Reply to This ]
      And we remember
    how to smile again
    when part of us will never
    again be young
    as grass or flower
    or hill or hope but
    there is no reason
    to believe memory
    is not a seed a smile
    an omen brighter
    than a dying star's brilliance
    dancing like lovers
    paired to the contours
    of the inner eye


    Just something that came to mind as I read this tribute. It's good to see you post again, Sarah. Take care.

    Bill
    | Posted on 2008-05-24 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]



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