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    dots Submission Name: Shameless Rantdots
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    Author: Broken Halo
    ASL Info:    22/M/ID
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 20/44/64
    Words: 187
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 134
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1235



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    dotsShameless Rantdots
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    For all my fucking language,
    For all my liberal jibes,
    For all your constant moaning,
    At my unwanted vibes.

    Who do you think you are?
    To tell me I'M the judge,
    To say that my opinions,
    Are simply a big grudge.
    Because you disagree,
    At how I write the word,
    Because you think I'm vulgar,
    My view you've never heard.

    Well hop on board right now,
    I don't give a shit,
    I value those who value me,
    So please fuck off, just quit.
    To stay would show you understand,
    To stay would show you know,
    That underneath the bluest curse,
    The truth does flow.

    Oh but you have the foresight,
    And the playful grace,
    But its for you I write for now,
    To you I give my space.
    Accept my choice if you can,
    And if you can't, fuck off,
    Go find another fucking bread,
    Of people like you, I've had enough.

    And to the ones who I respect,
    You know who you might be,
    Come on and join my shameless fucking rant,
    You're you, I'm me, and unlike them we're fuckin' free.




    Submitted on 2008-05-25 22:33:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is not a bad write
    You express yourself easily
    Though I strongly disagree with your message one cannot argue that this dosent flow quite gracefully
    Great Work
    God Bless
    Ron
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2008-05-26 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]



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