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    dots Submission Name: Adam couldn't help but stare at other women.dots
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    Author: Jakirina
    ASL Info:    19/F/WI
    Elite Ratio:    3.69 - 216/200/80
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsAdam couldn't help but stare at other women.dots
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    A kitchen blade is all I have,
    held between forefinger and thumb
    resting against your skin, shifting like a pulse
    as you swallow and breathe.

    You close your eyes. Twine threaded
    around your wrists, embracing your cold
    hands beneath you, resting against my thigh—
    still.

    Keep breathing.

    I keep you on my lap;
    fingers tangled in your locks
    the color of nightmares.

    Don’t Scream.

    A sigh, the sound of your soul
    escaping. I cradle your form
    cheek against my neck. I keep your tremors
    tight against my chest, letting their heat stain cranberry
    upon my body; its smell sweet.

    I will hold you
    until the sun dies.




    Submitted on 2008-05-25 23:46:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      incredibly intense. i really love this poem. the last line really goes well with it being such a strong line of passion because of how the opening stanza grabs hold of the readers attention. the emotion never flaked from beginning to end. very solid, i loved this.
    | Posted on 2008-05-26 00:00:00 | by cre_dia | [ Reply to This ]


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