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    dots Submission Name: For Patient 151dots
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    Author: Jakirina
    ASL Info:    19/F/WI
    Elite Ratio:    3.69 - 216/200/80
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
    Total Views: 73
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 710



    Description:
       A palinode in sonnet form.


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    dotsFor Patient 151dots
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    I left you a note written in ink milked
    from the distended bellies of spiders.
    Tied it with a scrap of red ribbon silk.
    Drying out eight needle-like legs, quiet-
    ly I pinned your pale songbird against the
    maroon wall, taking care to pierce each wing
    joint. It hung, your tiny Christ, still above
    my piece of parchment, one glossy eye fixed
    on your approach. I was wrong. Poor lovely
    caged creature, it had no fault between you
    and me. I should have taken your soft wrist
    between my teeth, running my tongue up through
    your pulse. Taken everything but the song
    from the bird’s throat; destroyed where you belong.




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