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    dots Submission Name: All Night Creature Featuredots
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    Author: jayisademon
    ASL Info:    20/m/il
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 90/47/51
    Words: 221
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
    Total Views: 54
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       I wrote this piece as a symbol of our fear of the people close to us. Maybe not our friends or people we talk to everyday; but the people we somehow overlook. Our neighbors particularly. I chose to take the role of the man who sees his neighbors as oddities, or truly strangers. People that our protagonist fears, but perhaps he exagerates or misunderstands. Maybe we never know.


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    God help me
    with neighbors
    like these.

    All night long
    I hear nothing,
    but blood curdling
    screams.

    Its an orgy i know
    i can tell from
    the red lights glow
    and the flickering
    of flesh
    Dancing across the window.

    Their shadows cast
    such humble appartions.
    as they stumble to
    their cars
    and do a daisy chain
    with the ghosts of perdition.

    Last eve was a dinner party
    a most glorious affair
    with stalin and hitler,
    and hippie who
    put a flower in
    Odin's hair.

    On Samhain
    my neighbors chant
    at the witching hour.
    Praying to a pterodactyl,
    who rains a gold shower.

    They lay out an altar,
    and cast the virgin spread eagle.
    as i watch from my window
    my eyes glaring through the peephole.
    I look to the cross,
    and look to the steeple.
    But I never go inside
    because I fear all people.

    God help me with neighbors
    like these.

    It's morning now.
    A golden sun casts
    itself across
    a birdbath with beautiful features
    I think of my neighbors,
    not as people
    but as heathen creatures.

    I wonder if they know
    how I see them
    with my eyes
    and my shock and awe.
    I wonder if they notice,
    if they ever notice at all.






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