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    dots Submission Name: Faith and Hopedots
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    Author: forfila
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    To imply you know someone seems like an escape away from hope, hope is the basis to propagate greater things.
    If you use hope, it entails each and everyone or no one at all, it exists as a way of being, not a object to be portioned upon decided recipients.
    Faith is a key in the way of hope, because beneath each conscious being and each temple body, the keeper of a soul lays equal possibilities in spirituality, faith can show those who doubt, those who oppose that hope exists regardless of the spitefulness of its enemies or disbelievers.
    To accuse and label one dark is a call we are not fit to make and a thought we are not fit to assume, in that judgment it becomes contradictory to believe in our own words, to forsake one and deny them our hope because our selfish means are not met by their actions is contrast to what it all stands for.
    Who is to say ones actions are not made to test another's understanding of hope, to test there willingness to use faith, because as abundant as hope is; it can be misused, misunderstood and become its own epiphany if by and for the wrong means it is used.
    To use hope and faith well; I think our actions should not be made as the reactions of an individual, but rather by gaging a need and addressing it.
    Failing at our efforts should see the attempts tried from other angles and in other ways.
    To love your foe and impose good tidings through the means of others if possible.
    To know the love of light is to know a selfless and in discriminant spirit that yearns only to heal.

    I think the word hope is thrown around too much, it is used in problematic situations which were vacant of hope in a last despairing effort.
    Faith seems to be related solely to the church in spiritual terms and is looked at as ones relationship to the father.
    Hope should be where thoughts wonder and suggestions are made, hope should be spoken of in our prayers, the hope for collective in betterment and universal understanding of hope.
    Faith should be where you reflect in happiness upon the substance and placement of your hope, it should be where others see the light shining in your believe, weather your believe is the turn around of a dark place, or the continuing of a path and of love.
    If some one said I hope it doesn't rain, while I understand them the word hope is grossly misused.
    If someone said I hope the future will be brighter than today, now that is hope I can place faith in.

    Once our faith lies in the substance of our hope, we are worshiping love.
    Love becomes the third key to true spirituality, most important; but third because the other two must be in place before you know love.
    With faith in our hope for the truth of in discriminant love, we become a servant to what can ultimately serve us far better than self.
    With these things in mind it is all we need as we come to address any pending issue.
    Lets face it, life is not always going to be an easy ride, so when the mind becomes tangled in the whys and hows of your situations, remember to silence those thoughts that stir frustration because as man and woman time will always be the dictator of emotions and house the length of our ordeals.

    But if we just relax, feel our hope, and use our faith in that hope to connect with love then we are on the right track.




    Submitted on 2008-05-26 04:53:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very cereberal, very honest, and hit's the nail on the head. but it has no life, give it some flow, some dance, you have great potential
    | Posted on 2008-05-26 00:00:00 | by caveman | [ Reply to This ]


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