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    dots Submission Name: childe3dots
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    Author: caveman
    Elite Ratio:    2.37 - 40/13/25
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Childrens
    Total Views: 843
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       here's a test, how many children does my sister have?


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    dotschilde3dots
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    Welcome elder brownie lord
    strong and wise of ancient lore.
    From whence came your folk?
    from the sea, the mountains
    where your stories first were told?

    Neither young mortal as well as nor
    Even though you are curious and bold
    an answer I will give in return for a bed
    to weave my merry dreams
    and rest my weary head.

    A shoe I have old and holed
    with tears instead of laces
    and gaps in it's soles

    From the day of it's birth
    for what it's worth
    My kin has always been
    children of this earth
    Living content without a care
    knowing nothing of surprise or mystery
    that is until we first saw you.


    Bass Switala





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