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    dots Submission Name: cleardots
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    Author: caveman
    Elite Ratio:    2.37 - 40/13/25
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Childrens
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    Description:
       I wrote it for a children's birthday card, also dedicated to Coletta Perry,


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    dotscleardots
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    The freedom to fly
    is an honor among many
    like the gift of breath
    the dance of dicovery
    and the rythm of music.
    To fully appreciate
    these to which we've earned our right
    we are responsible to live, love, share,
    and teach,
    and Dare to spread wings and take flight.
    Bass Switala





    Submitted on 2008-05-26 05:04:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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