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    dots Submission Name: Crashdots
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    Author: caveman
    Elite Ratio:    2.37 - 40/13/25
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
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       it was one of those put pen to paper and let it vomit itself out...


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    dotsCrashdots
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    There came a day when I knew
    There came a day when I grew
    from a seed to a tree
    from a tree to the sky
    and then came a night when I could fly
    then a night when I feared and fell
    no clouds
    no stars could keep me aloft
    But a great tree remembered me
    we embraced
    and I returned to the earth
    and planted his seeds
    so that he would never be forgotten
    'specially by me
    Bass Switala





    Submitted on 2008-05-26 05:17:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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