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    dots Submission Name: f'ing cupiddots

    Author: caveman
    Elite Ratio:    2.37 - 40/13/25
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsf'ing cupiddots

    Mysterious nights pass on by
    As I await one more moon
    Seductive winds beckon
    From where I bathe in itís light
    Sensual whispers from her lips
    Which know not a silver spoon
    Magical is her mind, her soul
    A grey cloud of sparkling spite
    Dysphoric in her stride
    Over the horizon with ivory flame
    Powerful days she will never hold
    While she rules the dark land twilight
    Free are her people, pure is her wisdom
    Clear is her judgement, as her heart is twain
    Sanguine is the night for one brief moment
    A bullet pierces from behind
    Followed by the rank of cordite
    Desire fills my cooling bones
    The earth floods with red
    As I lay in glee
    Passion is a dance, like the lights of a patrol car
    The making of itís music, the pattern of itís steps
    Trust me friends, I wouldnít take my advice

    © Bass Switala

    Submitted on 2008-05-26 05:23:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very interesting, It sounds like the night is love and death and you haven fallen in love with it. But perhaps I have missed the mark?
    | Posted on 2008-05-26 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]

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