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    dots Submission Name: fumbledots
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    Author: caveman
    Elite Ratio:    2.37 - 40/13/25
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
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       I sneezed it out one day while gazing at a very beutifull vixen, we never got any nearer then 120 ft, but she taught me something very important.


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    For many a day I have sat and wondered
    what the reasons for our blunders
    are they object lessons for us to learn
    or could they be comedic instances
    to boost the moods of others
    or do they have a deeper meaning
    behind a curtains keening
    I've come to no conclusion,
    it's not for that I care.
    It's just another hobby,
    a daydream floating in the air.
    Like fluffy puffy clouds
    to be seen
    to be painted
    and contemplated
    but never touched
    nor caressed
    Just a vision to be blessed
    Bass Switala





    Submitted on 2008-05-26 05:32:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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