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    dots Submission Name: Haffle Wouse dots
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    Author: caveman
    Elite Ratio:    2.37 - 40/13/25
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
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       Next time you stop in one of those 247 resteraunt/diner places, think of this lil ditty, was written while I was waitin tables...


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    dotsHaffle Wouse dots
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    Crazy is as crazy does
    Life goes to cartwheelin
    over the rainbow it was
    grab a hold of what you can
    don' worry 'bout the rest
    easy come easy go
    ye cigarette can wait
    'till the end of the show
    so pop a squat an pass the tray
    I'll be here 'till the break of day
    Sip ye coffee an play some tunes
    Come groove with us
    Third shift crew.
    Bass Switala





    Submitted on 2008-05-26 05:48:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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