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    dots Submission Name: Insanedots
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    Author: caveman
    Elite Ratio:    2.37 - 40/13/25
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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       it's horrible, I know but...


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    dotsInsanedots
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    It's quite easy being me
    'cause it comes so naturally
    I sit in this tree
    slappin at the bees
    and genuinly tossin fruit at the funny
    people who stare at me
    yes it is quite easy bein me
    but it's really startin to annoy
    can't understand why the funny
    people keep starin at me
    Bass Switala





    Submitted on 2008-05-26 05:54:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hey,
    I got it...Thanks. I love this poem. It makes a lot of sense...now...(lol)

    ~Carrie
    | Posted on 2008-05-26 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]
      did u write it? Im so confused!
    Either way i like it! its cute!

    ~Carrie

    | Posted on 2008-05-26 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]


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