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    dots Submission Name: nightmare dots
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    Author: caveman
    Elite Ratio:    2.37 - 40/13/25
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Dark
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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       there is nothing to fear


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    dotsnightmare dots
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    Sleep to the dream
    roll with the troll
    toss to your turn
    Rise but I will not shine.

    Sweat to your breath
    jump from your pulse
    rush to your hush
    Rise but I will not shine.

    Shake me awake
    lie at my side
    whisper in my ear
    But after what I've seen tonight,
    I will Rise but I will not Shine
    Bass Switala





    Submitted on 2008-05-26 06:36:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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