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    dots Submission Name: ReTreatdots

    Author: caveman
    Elite Ratio:    2.37 - 40/13/25
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       sometimes it's possible to be left alone, yet never alone

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    A hermit I am
    a hermit I'll be
    sitting alone in this cave.
    The sun is a blanket
    and the moon a shave.
    There are those who come to see
    the wildman who knows everything
    and there are those who just come
    to be there with me.
    Those that come to see run away
    from my stones
    and shouts of horrible vulgarity.
    Those who come to be stay
    for my smiles and my stories
    of magnificent mediocrity.
    I know nothing more then the average man
    But I do know it is better to love
    than to want.
    Better to care about them
    than it.
    Better to know yourself
    than to know this or that
    Better to be with another
    then to see them for
    what they are not
    A hermit I am, a Hermit I will be.
    Bass Switala

    Submitted on 2008-05-26 06:50:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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