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    dots Submission Name: Rose dots
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    Author: caveman
    Elite Ratio:    2.37 - 40/13/25
    Words: 42
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
    Total Views: 668
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       this one kinda came out like a cross between a sneeze and a vurp... <shudder>


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    dotsRose dots
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    A craving so bad it's driving me mad
    as mad as the hatter who sits
    at a chair staring at his
    cup of tea that awaits at
    the other side of a window of
    Bulletproof Glass
    Bass Switala





    Submitted on 2008-05-26 06:54:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      ahahahahaha

    I liked it. I really did.
    | Posted on 2008-07-01 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]
      This is kinda funny. I don't understand how the title relates to it though.
    | Posted on 2008-05-26 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]


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