Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: speaking with rosesdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: caveman
    Elite Ratio:    2.37 - 40/13/25
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 878
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 705



    Description:
       oh no but really this was dictated to me by a rosebush across the street that's having an affair with my turtle. JK popped in my head had to jot it down it took me to lunch


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsspeaking with rosesdots
    -------------------------------------------


    I've never seen the sunrise
    over mountains bare of taint
    but I have seen willows weeping
    to the footsteps of the saints
    I've never heard the laughter
    of the child yet unborn
    but I have listened to the starlight
    shimmering on the moor
    I've walked many a mile to be here
    and above all else I am sure
    that in the stead of being rich and famous
    tis better to be wise if poor
    Here I am if you'll take me
    there I go if you won't
    back to where willows weep
    starlight sings
    and I'm rarely weary
    to the bone.
    Bass Switala







    Submitted on 2008-05-26 07:02:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    161834

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry