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    dots Submission Name: A Life Of Few Wordsdots
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    Author: kingsley
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 100/59/46
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       We in Africa have changed in our apperance but our soul still walks in the path of our ancestors who believe in what they see now the poem is an explanation to religion in the mordern world


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    dotsA Life Of Few Wordsdots
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    Since the gods made nature their spokesman
    the world has been easy to understand
    because the laws of life were woven into one big mat
    A mat on which everybody can sleep

    Now there is just one shrine
    where all sacrifies are made
    There must we all go
    to remember the gods we see




    Submitted on 2008-05-26 13:14:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very short very apt...i think more can be written into this one
    | Posted on 2009-03-28 00:00:00 | by keestu | [ Reply to This ]
      I was born and raised on a grain and cattle ranch, and have spent much of my life in the outdoors, amidst nature. I see much of God in nature and the realities of nature!

    I think your excellent verse reflects the close ties between God and nature, and the ancient realities that never change.
    | Posted on 2008-09-12 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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