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    dots Submission Name: Thoughts on Sincerity.dots
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    Author: UnspokenDreamer
    ASL Info:    21
    Elite Ratio:    4.22 - 542/753/205
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
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    dotsThoughts on Sincerity.dots
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    An excerpt from a journal entry...

    It is refreshing to realize that there are many among us that are genuinely well-intended people. Those whose hearts scream out Justice, Hope, Peace, Love, Joy, Redemption, Forgiveness. None of us are capable of living out the full capacity of such things on our own, and therefore it is easy to cast our vote against the Salvation that so many have received. But I have recently been reminded that beneath the surface there often lies a budding seed. And seeds are never what we want to put on display, it is only the flowers that we give glory to. But without a seed there can be no flower. Beauty seems to be found more in the process than the end result.




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