the only problem i have with this piece is that there are bad things in this world too... things that he created. and it isnt that he created them bad... infact everything he created he said "it is good" [except that man was alone... that was not good]
i guess it is man who has taken this "goodness" and misused it but yeah... i think that this piece could be misunderstood by most who read it.
i realise that you have been restricted by form and structure though and you have done well within such restrictions.
Submission Name: All That Was Good
