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    dots Submission Name: It's youdots
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    Author: Black Angel
    ASL Info:    15/F/Tx
    Elite Ratio:    1.94 - 12/78/71
    Words: 175
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 84
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1119



    Description:
       A love song I tried to write. I know it sucks and there's no corus but whatever.


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    dotsIt's youdots
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    Butterflies leading me to you
    My fairytail have come true
    A prince charming to rescue me
    Giving me all that I need
    And it's you

    My heart goin' at 110
    The thought of your breath on my skin
    Warmth of our loves fire
    As we hold each other tighter

    The one to wipe away my tears
    The one to chase away my fears
    To keep me from all harms
    Wrapped tight in your arms
    And it's you

    Your the one I've needed
    The one I was searching for
    The one I've always wanted
    I'll never need more

    Your're more then I wished for
    More then I deserve
    More then I though possable
    My heart you will reserve

    So come and take me away
    So many things to need to say
    So many words a lifetime can't hold
    So many things that can't be told

    But believe me when I say
    That my love for you won't fade
    For it grows every moment
    Even though I struggle to show it




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