It was done well to an extent but the rhyme feels forced throughout, over all subject matter and feel is good, but the forced rhyme drowns the piece.
It was a good topic to take in, as the first comment said it brings a feel of the pain of war but the feel of rebirth and rebuilding, I have quoted from myself that no beauty is black and white, and to
"To view a flower as it blooms brings cruel indoctrination and visual content to the phenomena of belief."
This speaks to me of the tragedy and suffering of war, and of the futility of it! The Orchid, a flower of amazing beauty and a symbol both of sadness and joy! To cry with the Orchids would be to blend your sadness with theirs!
This was a heartfelt and soulful write, much with the mood of anguish and loss. Excellent work, lovely lady!