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    dots Submission Name: Where is Lady Justice?dots
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    Author: isis_lenore
    Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 335/126/47
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 62
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 257



    Description:
       I was thinking of medical treatment and insurance issues.


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    dotsWhere is Lady Justice?dots
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    Do you have to bring a purse of coin,
    To not be turned from the doors in scorn?

    Or does it depend on where you were born?
    Oh! How the hands of state, must be torn!

    Impartiality tipped, as objectivity is purloined!




    Submitted on 2008-05-27 22:46:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It could be about law courts and about fifty other things , as well as medical care!

    I wonder if this little poem is an idea for a bigger one?

    The form and the rhymescheme are great; I took a note of it, to try some myself. Except, I reckon "coin" and "purloined" aren't a good enough rhyme in this tiny poem, although it might be fine in some other poem. Maybe it would have been possible to have "purloin".
    On the other hand, maybe i'm the only one who cares! I've been reading some well-known Australian poets who write sonnets with the rhymes inside the lines, or with all half-rhymes.

    Rhyme is so interesting, and exasperating!
    | Posted on 2008-11-11 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]


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