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Where are we?


Author: danni_amazing
ASL Info:    17/F/Pa
Elite Ratio:    1.49 - 1 /3 /8
Words: 52
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Where are we?



We've coem so far.
From the middle to the begging straight on until the end.

I waited for your boat.
It never showed.

You left me in the cold all alone
In a place unknown.

Now you've come back.
Yet you still can't tell me

Where are we.....




Submitted on 2008-05-28 12:25:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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