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    dots Submission Name: Nightdots

    Author: Rainmaker
    ASL Info:    23 / M / Finland
    Elite Ratio:    4.84 - 45/50/19
    Words: 198
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 599
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       Something that needs little sanding to be done ;) Anyhow, this is how i have been planning the voices to go:
    Normal: Quite clear voice
    ( ) : "Raspin'" 'metal' voice
    And if you are wondering where the ( ) sections really go, well they start little before the normal line ends..
    And the music style is about little progressive rock/metal styled... or so i have been thinkin' :)
    Hope i remembered to put all in here now...

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    As sun moves, down the
    horizon - the night reigns
    Moon shines upon us
    And shades of gray rules
    These hills and lakes
    So old and so bold
    So beautiful!

    From the days of old
    The sun and the moon
    They travel -- hand by hand

    Tonight, tonight, tonight
    We dance
    In the night
    In trance
    We love you night

    We are the night!

    Oh how sweet the shadows?
    How amazing the silver light
    If I could catch it
    For the day's blight
    Oh night! Save us!
    Save us now! - From the sun!
    From the sun!

    From the days of old
    The sun and the moon
    They travel -- hand by hand

    [Chorus]x2 [ 2nd one with the stuff in ( ) ]
    Tonight, tonight, tonight! ( Tonight )
    We dance ( Dance )
    In the night ( The night )
    In trance ( Trance )
    We love you night ( Love you )

    ( The night is gone
    The sun comes up
    Oh night.. night
    Night, I miss you
    Oh night... )

    We dance In trance In the night! ( yeah, yeah yeah )

    Submitted on 2008-05-28 18:55:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      well written. so wonderful and worded
    | Posted on 2008-07-29 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]
      Personally, I think that the night is such an apologetic creature. And it is this feat that allows us to really fall in love with it.

    After all, a lot of us our only beautiful in the dark.

    I love the fact that you're approach would be along the lines of progressive rock. At least that way, the music can compliment its proud and seemingly unapologetic vibe. I think that other genres would just make it seem tacky or confusing.

    Anyway... goodluck with it.
    | Posted on 2008-05-29 00:00:00 | by ANGELO | [ Reply to This ]

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