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    dots Submission Name: To my grandmotherdots
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    Author: Little Gal
    ASL Info:    20 female, Bahrain
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 469/431/94
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       to my grandma.. (before she passed away) :( ..
    i havent posted here for a while................ im nervous !!


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    dotsTo my grandmotherdots
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    I only had one grandmother
    that too, you are now the only grandparent left.
    Yet you gave me the love of all four.

    Your sweet scent,
    I never forgot.
    And your patience,
    I can never endure.
    Love like yours,
    I might never feel.
    But one like you..
    I know,
    I will never find.

    To my grandmother,
    please have the willingness,
    and strength.
    To stay.




    Submitted on 2008-05-29 09:57:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      why did you smell your grand mother.. ?? :) guess she used a lot of perfumes.

    dont take me wrong.. I guess she must have gone to heaven...
    | Posted on 2008-06-02 00:00:00 | by rawpot | [ Reply to This ]


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