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    dots Submission Name: I want to be with youdots
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    Author: annezah
    ASL Info:    19/f/long island NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.5 - 14/15/16
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
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    dotsI want to be with youdots
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    I want to be with you,
    but your millions of miles away.
    i wish you would call just to ask about my day.
    it would make things so much better if i could hear you voice,
    I guess i can't complain too much, after all this was my choice.
    i wish i could hold you in my arms and look in to your eyes.
    i promise i will always be true to you and never tell you lies.
    its so hard to go to sleep without you by my side.
    my tears are the only thing ill ever try to hide.
    i lie awake in bed as the tears stream down my face,
    they keep going until the hit my pillow case.

    I Miss You...




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